i want a sweet girl frndEspecially if you write in the present tense, second person allows the reader to experience the story as if it’s their own. To avoid a “choose your own adventure” feel or an a
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Seeking: 女 年龄 18 到 43
Status: 27 单 没有答案 男
Location:
Interest In: 活动伙伴
Ethnicity: 亚洲
Living: 和父母住在一起
Eye Catcher: 武器
Height: 5'3 英寸
Body: 枯瘦
Hair/Eyes: 棕色, 黑色
Smoke: 没门
Drink: 永远不要碰它
Exercise 一周2次
Politics: 没有答案
Education: 高中辍学
Religion: 不可知论
Income: $15,001至$25,000
Occupation: Bachi Set Krna
Offspring: 没有
Personality: 爱冒险的
Country: Pakistan
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i want a sweet girl frndEspecially if you write in the present tense, second person allows the reader to experience the story as if it’s their own. To avoid a “choose your own adventure” feel or an aggressive tone, mix up sentence structure and add in description and dialogue. Using the pronoun “you” and describing action as it happens supplies a personal sense of urgency, propelling the story—and the reader—forward.Example You’re late. Heart pounding, you race up the stairs as the train enters the station. You weave around the slowmoving people milling on the platform and dash towards the train, throwing your body through the doorway with only a moment to spare.

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